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Thursday, 13 August 2015

Fitness is key to my job,it puts my body to the test.
Strength can also be key at times,weather is to keep going or to get into a dogfight.
My body can be battered and bruised a lot and I will be over sea at months at a time.

25/4/21 I was convoying through Afghanistan in a humvee with Bravo company.
We had to be on the lookout for hostile people that are causing harm all innocent people and to who help 
We sleep in old buildings with men on Watch for shadows lurking through the dark,people are always asking me how I sleep at night knowing that I could die in a split second.

Many people in my job I have seen losing their legs or arms and at last resort death.
Some poorly equipped men who fight for freedom and support us time times with our actions.

In my job we don't just go places guns blazing,we also go and help with the disaster relief by building shelters and providing clean food and water to New Zealand and foreign soil.

join the
NEW ZEALAND ARMY - Ngati tumatauenga

Monday, 3 August 2015

1941 war was declared.Tanks ,trucks and soldiers were everywhere. War torn USA was ugly. It was ugly to see young women and men being loaded in trucks to go away and fight, my time was near,I was skinny,tall and I wasn't really good at anything,so what would they won't with me.
A loving couple together life.

I said goodbye to my glamorous wife. She wouldn't let me go. Tears left her eyes to run into her hands, she fell to her knees as I was load into a Truck ,but we were told that seventeen year olds were too young but they took us anyway.

As a young medic, I was put in a tent with a squad of soldiers . Now in a tent the  I was always thinking about home. The tent had a rip from bullets tearing it apart from a previous attack.a little flash of the blue sky,although it was beautiful I was always thinking to myself that nothing was more beautiful than the blue of my wife's eyes.

Me along with thirteen soldiers were loaded into a plane,thirteen,thirteen families depending on me to bring their boys back,thirteen. I was now part of the vanguard (first to go). The green light was flashing,it was time to jump,we had a count down.

"Thirteen ok"
"Twelve ok"

At that point we were shot to pieces,the right wing was down I had to jump.

I woke up on the ground I had a gun to my head,two enemy's had me at point black range.
I reached for my gun,it was gone. Then I saw my sergeant in the tree he was looking over the enemy ready to take the shot,the enemy was yelling,two clean shots through their heads I then said

" nice shot sarge"

The Sergeant then said

"It wasn't me" 

I look up nothing . A third shot what taken, a German fell from a tree.  The mountain rifles were covering us from a hill,they looked horrible. Blood,sweat,tears and bodies were all around them. From the horizon Anzac  ships were sending hundreds of shells over the German position,one minute they were there,next minute they were gone.crisp bodies lay in the mud and in tank tracks. I fired my first shot,it hit a German in the neck, the gilt went down my spine,his blood was in my hands,he died in my arms. I fell unconscious.

25/4/15 I was playing the piano,my hands still remember the rifle,my time was near,I was going to see my brothers. I'm always thinking I should of gone with my brothers,my thirteen brothers.the dawn service was on,the guns went off,my heart  cried out.



WISHES TO go to Hollywood and play batman in a movie.
DREAMS OF playing soccer at the Fifa World Cup.
WANTS  TO BE a New Zealand army soldier in Afghanistan.  
WONDERS ABOUT  what he will be like as an adult.
FEARS  death when he thinks about it- it could be his time any time.
IS AFRAID OF dying a gross death from falling.
LIKES to always be outside playing a good game of soccer.
BELIEVES in ghosts and all that supernatural kind of stuff.
LOVES to play soccer and be in very dangerous places.
PLANS TO go to Hollywood and have a very long holiday.

Wednesday, 10 June 2015

                                                             Bridge to Terabithia

Chapter (1)
Jesse Oliver Aarons. JR

This chapter is about the character being introduced to the reader.
What I have picked up from Jess is that he likes  to run.
It  also tells us about how the family is poor, is tells us that they are poor from reading between the lines when it says / that they can't spare even five dollars. The setting is a sad,typical

Chapter (2)
Leslie Burke

In this chapter is introduced another character named Leslie Burke, Leslie Burke is a girl that recently moved next door to Jess, one thing that I've  picked up for reading about Leslie is that her family was rich but wanted to have a normal life

Chapter (3)
The fastest kid in fifth grade

In this chapter its about a race. In their race they have many heats and the people who are the slowest leave till there was only a handful of people left till Leslie won

Chapter (4)
Rulers of Terabithia

Leslie tells Jess why they moved the the town, Leslie say they moved there because they're family had the good life and so they moved to have what's Important / also they find a forest out the back of their houses Leslie and Jess find an old abandoned rope leading into the forest Leslie swings on it and describes it as being like a cloud, then she say that this could be their own special place and calls it "Terabithia" last of all they found a good place to make castle/stronghold/house.

Chapter (5)

The giant killers

The point of this chapter is that Leslie and Jess want revenge on Janice avery by writing a love note to meet her after school but never show up.

Chapter (6)

The coming of prince Terabithia

The main point of this chapter is it's coming up to Christmas and Jess is trying to find a present for Leslie, then one day Jess find a free dog to adoption, finally Jess and Leslie meet in terabithia and Jess gives Leslie the dog

Chapter (7)

The golden room

The main point of this chapter is that Jess and Leslie are at Leslie's house panting a new colour to a room, Jess and Leslie see Janice avery crying and find out that she get hurt by her father a lot

For me this chapters was funny because it was good to see some change to the school

Chapter (8)


The main point of this chapter is that Jess and his family are going to church,Leslie and Jess talk about church, Leslie really like it and said that is better than a movie

This chapter was really short and not much happened

Chapter (9)

The evil spell

The main point of this chapter is that Leslie feels like there is an  evil spell on Terabithia, then terabithia starts pouring rain

For me this chapter was kind of boring

Chapter (10)

The perfect day

The main point of this chapter is the miss Edmunds invited Jess to go to the gallery and while Jess is away Leslie dies.

For me this chapter I had mixed feelings about the fact that Jess is away having fun but then Leslie dies.

Chapter (11)


The main point of this chapter is just Jess won't except that Leslie is gone and keeps thinking that's it His (Jess) folt that she died because Jess wasn't there when Leslie needed him most

For me this chapter was sad

Chapter (12)


The main point of this chapter Is when Jess goes to Leslie's funeral and Bill and Jess start to become good friends

Chapter (13)

Building the bridge

The main point of this chapter is that Jess finally builds the bridge to terabithia by using Leslie's parents leftover surplus from their house, when done Jess makes his sister the queen of

I like this chapter because Jess still has Terabithia even knowing that Leslie is gone and it's what Leslie would have wanted

Tuesday, 31 March 2015

Benjamin Peter cullimore- my figure is Peter

My figure is Peter one of Jesus's disciples.

St. Peter was a disciple who was told by Jesus that he is going to deny Jesus three times about knowing him after telling Jesus that he would always stand by his Side

This show that it it sometimes hard to tell the truth and be resilient in life even if it's a promise

I think that St. Peter did do wrong even know it would have been hard to be right, it tells me the same thing.

Thursday, 12 March 2015

Deep in the forest where people go in but never come out, There lies a rusted old bus.

In the bus are of what remains of the children's corpses.

When near this rusted old bus there are three magic words
Then when the three magic words are said,rusted,old,bus a spirit rushes and rustles through the
The trees and finally of contact